Production - Improvements needed before FINAL

Before our final deadline, will have some minor problems that need improving. On recent feedback from our teachers and peers, some of the feedback consisted of:

We will mainly focus on the lip syncing as this is the main aspect our audience will focus on, and if it's out of sync it will ruin the whole video.
We used the split screen at the beginning of our video because we had feedback a few weeks ago, saying we had no closeups at the beginning, therefore we thought the close up, split screens, in different locations, would resolve this problem as well as make the video a lot more interesting.