The general feedback received from teachers is that the music video is genre appropriate and we have plenty of atmospheric frames filmed. However the main flaw that is weakening the video and it's quality is the build up in the lyrics does not mirror the visuals, and is not intense enough. In order to tackle this we will merely use a vast variety of shots coming up to/and during the build up.
Another flaw is the introduction of the artist in the beginning is weak as there are no close up/mid shots of him. Instead we have a long shot which introduces the music video, so that will be changed too.
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